Saturday, August 15, 2009

Second Task

Topic: Last Weekend

Final Version (earlier versions can be found below)

Last weekend,
I found a new person to befriend,
I saw that she was godsend,
She was not made to offend,
I thought she was worthy of commend.

So when I had a party to attend,
I asked her to join me and blend,
She told me that was not what she intend,
She was not here for me to vend.

Alas that was the end,
I could do nothing to emend,
turned out, she was all pretend,
and all of this happened last weekend.

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Attempt 3:
Last weekend,
I did nothing at all.

I went to a ball,
I went to the mall.
I bought a new shawl.
I was soaked in a rainfall.
I found a software to install.

Last weekend,
I did nothing at all.

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Attempt 2:
Last weekend,
I missed my train home.

Last weekend,
I wrote a poem.

Last weekend,
I went to a mosque, and admired its dome.

Last weekend,
I found an antique comb.

Last weekend,
I found a park to roam.

Last weekend,
I thought I saw a gnome,

Last weekend,
I coloured my nails chrome,

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Attempt 1:
Last weekend,
I thought was a bore.

Last weekend,
I read not one novel, but four.

Last weekend,
I arranged my stuff to store.

Last weekend,
I saw an eagle soar,


Last weekend,
I helped someone I adore.
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2 comments:

  1. Your last few poems are cool. Previously it was just cuba-cuba to rhyme kan!

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  2. XDD ya.... you are observant! I was just trying to get the feel of it but found that it was lacking in something.. luckily the third/fourth attempts are okay . :D

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